Terms:super: words on screen
VO: voice over–narration or talking during the spot
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Ecstasy Youth Commercial
Description: 45 Sec TV Script
NARRATIVE: We open on a scene in a nightclub. A girl is lying on the floor. She has collapsed and is sweating profusely. Her friends are frantic around her. They ask her if she is alright and roll her over. Her distraught boyfriend watches on:
Girlfriend: “What did she take?”
Boyfriend: “I don’t know what was in it …I think it was ecstasy”
The camera moves rapidly through a nearby TV showing a film clip. We are suddenly in the bedroom of a 16-year-old girl. She is sitting forlornly on her bed, tears rolling down her cheeks. We hear her boyfriend speak:
Boy: “I don’t know why she takes it.she always gets so depressed coming down.”
The camera moves rapidly through the glass of the girl’s window and into the window of a building across the road. We are in a dental surgery. A young guy is in the chair with a dentist operating on his mouth. We hear the young guy’s thoughts, as well as the dentist’s voice during the examination. We cut away to a rapid montage of damaged teeth close-ups and the guy’s agonised face:
Dentist: “You’ve done quite a bit of damage in there.”
Guy: “I didn’t know how many health problems it could cause”
Dentist: “The grinding has cracked your front teeth..this is pretty serious.”
The camera moves rapidly through a picture on the wall. The curtains in the picture suddenly become curtains around a bed in an intensive care unit in a hospital. They pull to one side as we see a young man experiencing toxic meltdown. Hospital staff are frantically trying to reduce his body temperature as his distraught parents look on.
We hear the voice of his friend.
Girl: “I don’t know whether he’s going to make it….he just wanted to try something new.”
A super appears and we hear:
” Ecstasy. You don’t know what it’ll do to you”
For more information call 1800 250 015 or visit www.drugs.health.gov.au
We also see a Government crest
The screen goes blank and a government authorisation appears.
VO: Authorised by the Australian Government, Canberra .
Super: Authorised by the Australian Government, Canberra .